Stanza: not a very creative approach but you worked it out pretty nicely, no imagery but emotion was there. Vocab was good, used nice examples to express what you were saying, direct situations, not only theory. Flow was okay, could have elaborated a bit more here and there, give more details or a more personal approach but overall solid drop.

~Lady Fiya~: had a more creative and poetic approach but you should have made it longer in my opinion, it had potential but you didn't quite get it all out there. The emotion was strong, no imagery though, vocab was on point, flow was decent. The first part was nice intro but it doesn't really count as a topical verse I think.

Vote goes to Stanza, LF's verse had potential but didn't quite work out...

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