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Old 07-31-05, 03:32 PM   #2
chip
pain is weakness leaving the body
 
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very original topic and nicely worded. pretty nice piece.

They find the renegades and deport them,
declining entrance to an even worst home,
Not free, despite claims, birthing even worse pains...
just americans leaving their loved ones alone.

I especially like this part bcuz i can relate in a way many people could never understand.
nice poem, keep writing.
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