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Old 07-31-05, 04:52 PM   #10
Spoken Word
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Voted For: El Dios

El Dios:

Like ya boy ya don't get Eazy-Elevation, so stop with all the "werdz"..
You gets R.I.P.ped just like him, cuz tha H.erb I.ngested his own V.erbz..

^^well it was an ok attempt at a punch, but it was just too much, keep the punches simple yet sweet. Throw better metaphors in there also

Overall: 6/10

Eazy-E:

This dude is like Mc Hammer tryin to Battlin me
Gonna merk his ass wit a punches like Ali

^^ Youre disrespecting eazy-e's name with a punch like that, its not solid in any way or form. The punch was mediocre, the set up was wack and you need to work on your wording.


Overall: 1.5/10


Vote: El Dios


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