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Old 07-31-05, 07:12 PM   #23
Spoken Word
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Voted For: E-Ray-Sir

E-Ray-Sir:

ok let me set this off with a hello..now that I got that out a the way
why you gotta try be smart? you couldnt be "bright" if your name was "day"
^^decent meta, set up was retarded though 5/10
by the way theres nothing unrestricted about being limited in skill
kids rhymes seem dead and run down like week old road kills
^^ok bar not too great 4/10
never the less...I can still sever the best...with a clever contest
This is a dim day for restricted like the weathers a mess
^^good multies, perfect flow, ok meta 8/10
So how bout we leave it on a positive rhyme
cause youll never transform from wak to dope even if you were optimis prime.
^^good meta ok closer 6/10

Overall: 23/40 (58%)


Unrestricted:

ok,bout to fry this noob named E-Ray, but no need to call me sir
jus becuz u see wat u wana be ertime i look in the mirror
^^ehh that was kinda gay 3/10
ill put u in the dirt like i was a farmer and u was a seed
and then ill pluck ur ass out like a worthless weed
^^no 2/10
accepting this battle means u really dont care bout ur record
cuz ur bout to have a loss on it in a very quick second
^^no 2/10
u suck, u wouldnt have props if u was a stage play
like the d.c. arsonist, ill "fry" u anyday
^^decent 4/10

Overall: 11/40 (28%)


Vote: E-Ray-Sir


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