Voted For: ~Lady Fiya~

ummmmm,ok, tweetys piece to me was all about imagery, altho there was a certain degree of emotion potrayed in ur piece, i jus felt that fiyas was more powerful.

Lady fiya's verse flowed easier, and ur use of varied vocabulary and alliteration here and there made it nice to say out loud. The topic was nice and the stories that u both told were good. But i thought putting the quote as the introduction was a nice touch for LF and gave the whole story a very distinct moral.

overall i think LF's verse flowed better, had a more extensive range of vocabulary and was a more original topic. but both were nice to read. no hate.

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