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Old 07-31-05, 08:05 PM   #19
Daubs
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Voted For: L.I.

this nigga's a fake threat, I'll Jay Vets, know why?
Untuck gats like nun-chucks, we'll see you Jet, L.I.

OK, PRETTY DECENT OPENER, BASIC RHYMING.

seriously mayne,you couldnt fight my initials,you hearin this,lame?
DC'll SNIPE a nigga, you must be L.iterally I.nsane

UMM, OK NAMEPLAY BUT PUNCH WAS WEAK.

mockin this man, he do audio? the L.I.sp is tired bitch
is this Bwova fo WHEEL? go back into wi-TIRE-ment

BASIC PUNCH, BUT GOOD WORDPLAY AND PERSONAL.

couldnt stay outta tha league, so next week i'll make this gay pay hell
he'll neva MURDER... thas why Mr. I. signed outta K.L.L.

YOUR BEST BAR, CREATIVE PERSONAL AND GOOD QORDPLAY, NICE ONE!

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ur fit to be tied down to a loss like tragedys that happen
we aint showin u the ropes when we say DoKnotContinue rapping

GOOD WORDPLAY AND NICE NAMEPLAY, DECENT OPENER.

u aint ghost writing shit for vets like me. recognize the tight sound
cuz the only D.C. we go to for lines will be a visit to the white house

AN OK PUNCH, KINDA CREATIVE AND IT HIT.

ur a fuckin herb. its true no one can fill yah socks kid
shit ive heard better raps from andy milanokis

I SUPPOSE IT HIT BUT THIS WAS WAYYYYY TO BASIC.

u aint cockin guns. AK's aint fuckin with me yep
cuz u rockin more blanks than dumb kids on SAT tests

HAHAHA, CREATIVE CLOSER...GOOD SHITS.

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LI CAME WEAK HERE IMO,

I THOUGHT IHE WOULDA TOOK IT EASY BUT IT TURNED OUT TO BA A GOOD BATTLE.

IT WAS CLOSE AS BOTH VERSES WERE INCONSISTANT WITH SOLID PUNCHES.

BOTH CLOSERS ON EACH VERSE WERE STRAIGHT FIRE TOO.

AFTER RE-READIN THE VERSES IMA GO WIT LI BY A HAIR FOR HAVING STRONGER NAMEPLAY.

YOURS WAS AIGHT DC BUT THEY DIDNT HIT AS HARD....ALSO FIX YOUR STRUCTURE UP.

NO HATE

RTF IN SIG SO I DONT HAVE TO REMOVE THIS!!
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