Voted For: Barz&Penstripes

Barz&Penstripes:

Listen I destroy legends like crash dummies and drug addiction
This prophecies young 100% bullshit unrealistic born of fiction
^^not that good but ok 4/10
After me u'll need oven mittens & robotic arms to grasp da mic
Its Common to sense "the bitch in yoo" like Hermaphrodites
^^good meta nice punch 7/10
In your Sig Hov is apparent within a blue backdrop embarassed
Go fig ur flows soft like Qtip ends and Gaylord Fockers parents
^^ehh 4/10
A gunblast to the head would help you better off the mental
Get the lead out your ass you might write better off the pencil
^^good bar nice flow 7/10
This is friendly fire a display of Cain and Abel in sentence
Punch this pussy in the mouth leave'em tampons to spit with
^^decent 5/10
Clean his lips with, sulk, moan and bitch with, alone I pitch dis
In reality get your chin check and broke like asian dishes
^^dope closer 8/10

Overall: 35/60 (58%)


Young Phrophecy:

Introspective...dahhs and do's from idolizing fools/I awake to bake, quake, and demolish you/ recieve ha's and oooh's from fantizing spoofs/ from the lyrical Armageddon i cast upon this goof/
^^this was wack structure terrible 7/20
You couldn't destroy anything if i gave you a wrecking ball/ and the weather is surely hot but ya rhymes are not at all/
^^no 3/10
In time you'll realize everyone had tried and failed/ but you i make an example hanging you on a wall with nails/
^^ok 4/10
Like before i said i shall come like a thief in the night/ Your finished! cuz your more played out the white boy's pickin up mic's(hahaha)/
^^no 2/10
I pause time just second to think of the next line/thinkin to myself "Nigga i'ma kill em' wit this rhyme!"/
^^no 1/10
Stupid wannabe Microphones are rappers...Cool?/ and ya fuckin lines are shittier than a sample of dog stool(dog shit)/
^^ehh 4/10
I come wit more tracks than a CD see!/ and i rhyme harder than them niggaz on Smack DVD/
^^Ehh 4/10
and the name barz&penstripes that's so confusing/and i flip more niggaz the fucking circus amusements//
^^finally a meta 6/10

Overall: 21/90 (23%)


Vote: Barz&Penstripes


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