Voted For: Intermental

pussy.. why you on a collision course wit the best/
if you act like a action hero I won't neglect to put the 'fantastic 4' to ya chest/
^^not a diss at all...0/10
intermental will change his ways when Law round/
either that or catch more strays then a fuccin' dog pound/
^^^no......1/10
you done mastered frontin' ta' people/
you mind as well try out for Football in Philly cause it's the only way you runnin' wit 'eagles'/
^^bah...ight.....3/10
yo skills are limited how you gon diss me b?/
when I pop I bet Intermental a drop like Dirk Nowitzki 3/
^^forced rhyme for real....3/10
then I'll keep unloadin' hollows/
talk shit and get 'capped' like a fuckin' Coca Cola bottle/
^^played........2/10
you wack and clear to see through like dasani too/
get outta line and CSI uh' tuck you in cover like ya Mommy do/
^^^NO....a mom line?....2/10
I can fucc you up..... ONE VERSE... lend a pencil/
or I can snuff you up... ONE HURSE.... after the shots "inter" "mental"/
^^^finnally a personal bu it sucked..2/10

Fix ya structure up.YA can't have a line with 5 words then a line with 15 right above it.And stop with the "/' at the end.Looks more newbish.And get some punches.Get some multis and metaphors.

The only time lawless wud beat me is like david blaine and usin drastic magic,
My punches smack him in his stomach and now hes coughing up lactic acid,
^^^good rhyming...good punch...5/10
Does he realise he battlin me.......Its like I sprayed mase in his eyes,
Hes like R Kelly, He thinks he can beat me, he really believes he can fly
^^^^OK......5/10
Yo its a mistake battlin me cos imma expose u like eve and that sex tape,
you a fake, Yo jus write Inter in ure "notable losses" cos it seem like fate
^^set up bad as sex lines are redundant..but 3/10
Mix lawless with rap and we automatically dissolve this,
Cos it dont go well together but he can't control shit,
^^^nah...punch lacked....3/10
Im kickin this guys ass with my shoes where the hole at?
Look at his shoes..............now wheres his soul (sole) at........,
^^Soul/sole lines played....3/10
He tryin to teach "tha law" but lawless full of "flaw",
So check youreself, i thought u waz hard, what you runnin for
^^OK...4/10

Hmm...mediocre verse here.I think you need the step your rhyme sheme up.One sllyable rhyming doesn't cut -it anymore.Had some played lines.Some wordplay and metaphors would have been nice too.And step your personal game up.

Vote-Intermal
Ooh...and in my battle with the mexican guy...is that guy mad dawg?cause you called him mad dawg...so is he?