Voted For: ColdSTEEL

Look at the chump of the crew,Claims himself the boss!
This battle is over even Randy Mcnally cant help ur "Loss!".
^^good rhyming....weak punch...3/10
"Drop quicker!"...Why?...We know your fake son!
Take this "L" like vitamins...cuz ur gonna be lookin like he Ate 1.(8-1)
^^^creativite.....6/10
He aint even a worthy fighter,sorta like Bernard Hopkins.
Ur punches been seen ery'where,sorta like bird droppins!
^^OK...but worded a lil bland...5/10
Imma make this real eazy...like Wit built in strategy!
Cuz the only time you get close ta ah crown is if you filled in cavity's!
^^Nice multi.....6/10

Punches wasn't all that hot.But I loved the multis.I see that one sllyable rhyme sheme around here too much.Had creativity on that 8-1 line.Bird droppins was just...too basic.

I gotta spit form the end in reverse for u to finish me
U sippin Hennessey …..and from anywhere but Memphis cause it aint a ten-I-see(Tennessee)
^^you serious..this wordplay is played as fuck..3/10
True name cause u aint hot and you steel rhymes that’s a true fact
Saying he wanna “CHANGE” the game so he lined up “4 QBS” to get a “DOLLAR BACK”
^^set- up was good,but didn't relate to punch....5/10
This kid is wack…. He only win one liners and no shows unless he battling sorry cats
Name of a fake rap hero cold steel save your life the villains sending me
^^didn't rhyme...whack....0/10
He so slow he walked to “McDonalds” to try to find his “arch enemy’
I aint gonna spit gun talk cause I really don’t need to spray
^^didn't rhyme and shit....0/10
Forget a clip to the head his brains already where defeat lay( the feet)
Never in~vite-a-man (vitamin) to battle its not good for your heath
^^ok......5/10
Reflecting back ova your dead body so in your avatar you see yourself
Let hell freeze ova so u can get a breath of fresh air like a pack of mints
^^didn't rhyme again....4/10
So fuck using pen-n-paper ur crews just dead people like the sixth sense
Mislead Meager Mother fuckers no wonder u don’t get respect
^^you not gonna rhyme anymore are you?...0/10
Not to mention half of your damn crew is a bunch of R.A.W. rejects
^^gon finish that bar?

MAN....I thought because of the more lines that you woulda won...but I guess not.For some reason you just stopped rhymin words for no reason.THat messed you up.Had some played werdplay like the vitamin and tennessee one.

Vote-Colsteel
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