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Old 07-31-05, 11:53 PM   #12
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Flow-Damn....R-rated murder Gongshow in this catergory.SHit...Rated even had alliteration.A rare sight thses days.
"Pratically Particular To Secular Sections of Self Salvation.."
^^DAMN...talk about tongue twisters

Content-Like all topicals..there were points when I was bored.Concept wasn't really inovative by neither.Imajery was better by R.Gong..my advice is to get a little more complex.

Wording-R as usual.The lines just seemed to be made for each other.Nice job here.Gong...wording is not something that can be taught...it's something that gonna come from experience

Multis-R....not many lines(if any) where he rhymed words with one sllyables.

Vocab-R....every like had one word that can be found on a high school exam

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