wow man i felt this......tight shit....ill try and see if i can and persue these people into nominating you..if not write more stuff like this and you will definitley make it..my advice to you take more time and use bigger vocabulary it will make your piece more enjoyable to read this piece right hurr was perfrectly structured aok emotion and pretty damn good rhyme sceme i say keep it up man........and return the favor...and remember vocabulary is they key...iight mayne im out rtf