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Old 08-01-05, 11:18 AM   #26
Spektikul
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Voted For: Daubs

DAUBS

Like lazy court cases after this battle youll be sue-is-idol..
Theorietically speaking..
Your verse couldnt cause a big bang......with your usertitle!!
HIT HARD^
Ima creep up on you like a rapist, but you'd probably enjoy it..
And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet..
VERY NICE PLAY OFF HIS NAME^
Call me a friendly cook,the way ima be batterin and fryin peers..
& RV's like daft bakers,your rhymes arnt heard even with pie-in-ears..
SELF-GLORIFIED/NO PUNCH^
You give many shout outs, but none of RV really wanna listen..
Look, ive left Mac dismantled.....like a computer technician..
STILL SELF-GLORFIED/WEAKER PUNCH^

Daubs, I gotts hand it to ya man, you had a few really dope punches and name play in the first 2 bars, after that you started to fall off. And you said that if we dont get the wordplay to PM you or dont vote...well in your last 2 bars I can clearly see the wordplay and I thought it was not bad, except for the fact that it was half self-glorifying and half not hitting your opponent...Ima have to go ahead and give you a 5/10 for half of your verse being dope man, no beef, were homies.

MACREEP

all his battles r 6 lines,talk bout unable to shake the road
cause his brain is a newborn clitorus,shit can't take a load
OK WORDPLAY^
crying his ass off for a chick like his ass is a cigarette crook
he struttin the teary I's(eyes)like I ripped the alphabet book
OK...KINDA PLAYED^
leader cause ez left,so you ain't dope cause of ya mother's foam*
ya might be Paris of troy,by the way you stole another's throne
WEAK^
deny's label of geek,but it futile,he talking from a glass circle
cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel
WEAK^

Mac, well I guess yours was not bad...but to be honest I wasnt really feelin it. I mean, you claim to have personals in every bar, I look and yes there are...but, all you really did was state a minor fact about him in half of the first bar and then the rest was crap and didnt really go with the personal you picked. Here, lets take a look at your personals:
-All his battles are 6 lines
SO WHAT
-Crying his ass off like a chick
YOU DIDNT PLAY OFF THAT
-Cause your leader ez left
NO PUNCH OFF THAT
-Denys label of geek
WTF
-Cause he be here all day postin a lot
YOU POST MORE THAN HE DOES, WEAK PERSONAL NONE THE LESS

You see...ya cant just go stating minor personals at the start of your lines and then not play off them like that, shits wack. Ill give you this much tho, you did have some good wordplay in there...and for that I will generously give you a 3.5/10

V/DAUBS....................................