Voted For: .Merkage.

Aii This is How it Goes

Merkage
Man All You really need to do is learn How to correct your Structure man the shit is sloppy like baby daipers after a long shit .lol. So work On That other than that your verse was coo you got some nice wordplay and thats good som,es nice punchez to go with your wordplay and thats good but ................You dont have any personals thats no big deal yet bcuz the guy is a newb but yet you should always try to include atleast one personal in a battle always you never know how that will help you man so next time try to include a personal or sumthing like that man ok
overall i think that you win So you get my v/Merkage

Blueshift
Man your lines werent a verse it was a paragraph and I really couldnt tell if you did 5 barz or 5 stanza's ..........and when i did read it it had some played wordplay and concept man and thats not really good to see win you tryin to win a battle i dont have much to say about your verse except try to fix ya structure and try to come more original next time

my v/ merkage

RTF in my Battle link or this gets removed