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Old 08-01-05, 04:30 PM   #32
Spoken Word
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Voted For: Keyweezy

KeyWeezy:

Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused
When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"!
^^lol good bar 8/10
RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear..
So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear.
^^decent meta 5/10
You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'..
Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing!
^^dope closer 7/10

Overall: 20/30 (67%)


Stanza:

When I Smack Yo Tongue W/ Oil Was The Only Time Yo Words Shined
Your FootSteps Bcuz the More of You I Take The more I Leave Behind
^^decent opener 6/10
Im Puttin Yo Shit Out On The Streetz..... Like It Was Evicted Tenants
They Call Me Breath Bcuz you couldnt Hold me for more Than a Minute
^^good bar 7/10
I didnt See Your Determination In Yo Eyes Bcuz Im Busy Merkin Yo Face
You Got Light Lyrics The Way They Fill The Room And Take Up No Space
^^not great but ok 6/10

Overall: 19/30 (63%)


Vote: Keyweezy.

Pretty close battle, but keys opener was pretty good as was his closer, i think if your closer was better stanza you would have easily won but i think you underestimated your opponent here.


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