View Single Post
Old 08-01-05, 06:00 PM   #31
PrahJect
Champion
 
PrahJect's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,044
From: BedStuy
IP:

Voted For: Daubs

Ok lets breaK it down:

all his battles r 6 lines,talk bout unable to shake the road
cause his brain is a newborn clitorus,shit can't take a load
^^^
This was a hot line the wordplay and the creativity was really good....5/5

crying his ass off for a chick like his ass is a cigarette crook
he struttin the teary I's(eyes)like I ripped the alphabet book
^^^^
Not too great I saw what you were gettin at but it wasnt great 2/5

leader cause ez left,so you ain't dope cause of ya mother's foam*
ya might be Paris of troy,by the way you stole another's throne
^^^
Funny line (1st) but 2nd wasnt too great.....4/5

deny's label of geek,but it futile,he talking from a glass circle
^^^good try but wheres the punch....1/5 sorry

cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel
*HE's only leader of living legends because M-Easy left
^^^
Ok decent I see the punch not too hard

IP:


Like lazy court cases after this battle youll be sue-is-idol..
Theorietically speaking..
Your verse couldnt cause a big bang......with your usertitle!!
^
HAHAHAHA THIS WAS SO CREATIVE....brilliant use....5/5

Ima creep up on you like a rapist, but you'd probably enjoy it..
And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet..
^^
Sorry but the first line I didnt like its too played seemd like a filler but the second was decent but also seen that shit...2/5

Call me a friendly cook,the way ima be batterin and fryin peers..
& RV's like daft bakers,your rhymes arnt heard even with pie-in-ears..
^^
This was good....kinda self gory but good wordplay and use...3/5

You give many shout outs, but none of RV really wanna listen..
Look, ive left Mac dismantled.....like a computer technician..
^^^
I like this line liked the creativity and wordplay...4/5

Macreep: Ok stuff, Ive seen much better....keep up
Daubs: Nice shit there dawg....you got it hard...nice battle between us btw

Daubs gets this...RTF on my battle with Lawless or this vote will be removed

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=199248
__________________
www.soundclick.com/dollaback
Send a message via AIM to PrahJect Send a message via MSN to PrahJect