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Voted For: Intermental
pussy.. why you on a collision course wit the best/
if you act like a action hero I won't neglect to put the 'fantastic 4' to ya chest/
WEAK SET UP, GOOD WORDPLAY IN PUNCH.
intermental will change his ways when Law round/
either that or catch more strays then a fuccin' dog pound/
NICE WORDPLAY
you done mastered frontin' ta' people/
you mind as well try out for Football in Philly cause it's the only way you runnin' wit 'eagles'/
MEH, OK...
yo skills are limited how you gon diss me b?/
when I pop I bet Intermental a drop like Dirk Nowitzki 3/
UMMM........
then I'll keep unloadin' hollows/
talk shit and get 'capped' like a fuckin' Coca Cola bottle/
PLAYED CONCEPT, WELL WEAK PUNCH.
you wack and clear to see through like dasani too/
get outta line and CSI uh' tuck you in cover like ya Mommy do/
MEH, DECENT FLOW ATTEMPTED WORDPLAY.
I can fucc you up..... ONE VERSE... lend a pencil/
or I can snuff you up... ONE HURSE.... after the shots "inter" "mental"/
GOOD NAMEPLAY.
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The only time lawless wud beat me is like david blaine and usin drastic magic,
My punches smack him in his stomach and now hes coughing up lactic acid,
GOOD SETUP, PUNCH FELL OFF.
Does he realise he battlin me.......Its like I sprayed mase in his eyes,
Hes like R Kelly, He thinks he can beat me, he really believes he can fly
YEAH NICE PUNCH.
Yo its a mistake battlin me cos imma expose u like eve and that sex tape,
you a fake, Yo jus write Inter in ure "notable losses" cos it seem like fate
KINDA WEAK.
Mix lawless with rap and we automatically dissolve this,
Cos it dont go well together but he can't control shit,
MEH....WEAK REALLY.
Im kickin this guys ass with my shoes where the hole at?
Look at his shoes..............now wheres his soul (sole) at........,
ATTEMPTED WORDPLAY, BUT NOT THAT HARD HITTIN.
He tryin to teach "tha law" but lawless full of "flaw",
So check youreself, i thought u waz hard, what you runnin for
FAKE PERSONAL GOOD NAMEPLAY IN SETUP.
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law, you need to fix your structure up definately man, it kills your whole verse and work on not stretchin your lines and makin em equal.
Both came weak, but inter gets my vote cos some of laws bars were played to fuck and others had no punch.
crappy battle rally, both step up ya game.
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