Thread: My Mind's Lost
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Old 08-01-05, 10:28 PM   #5
Ca'lam
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hook - simple.. but it works.. like it..


First verse - thought he slurred his words.. he needs to try a lil harder in getting his words clearer.. but flow was strait.. lyrics were strait.. not bad..

second verse - my personal favorite.. flow was on point.. lyrics were good.. pretty decent.. feelin it.. gj here

third verse - It felt lie it was short.. but it was sweet.. short and sweet kinda.. flow was strait.. lyrics were aight.. i thought you might have gotten a lil more complex than you did.. but it was strait.. solid verse ...


overall i thought track was decent..


by the way.. beat was aiight
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