I liked this Verse, Pretty Much decent in the category "Imagery". Very easily being portrait in my mind. Vocab was overall decent...Flow was good, and good having shorter Lines. The concept was overall "Dope" The approach of it is what made this piece so Appealing to me..Decent Drop here.
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
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ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
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