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Old 08-01-05, 11:35 PM   #34
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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dude for real,pop a gun at him and watch his cartwheel
Homeboy ya wack and lack verbal skill,cant even buy a deal
Dont even front like ya gangsta,I see thru ya like fiberglass
Think im playin I'll shatta ya ass,like a cup made out of glass
CPRNY OPENER NOT EVEN A PUNCH REALLY 6/10
You could rap while takin Herion and still couldnt "flow dope"
Take my dick out ya mouth,so no reason why you choked
PLAYED ASS LINE NO PERSONAL 5/10
This fool the kinda rapper to bring his own mic to the studio
Or put his own tape in the stereo,and say that he's in the radioBESTLINE IN UR VERSE TU STILL NO PERSONAL 8/10
UR ALL PLAYED WORK ON CREATVITY PERSONALS UR FLOW AND STRUCTURE WERE GOOD BUT THATS IT REALLY U LOOK LIKE U PREWRITE



dudes straight garbage, has some issues and needs help to solve em
add whack to front, herb to the back....and that equals tha problem WORST LINE IN UR VERSE NOT REALLUY NAME PLAY LOL 5/10
tryna sniff out a win here....my punches leave ya with a torn nose
need skills man, but your gobblin more cock than thanksgiving pornos
THIS WAS FUNNY BUT NO PERSONAL 7/10
this whore knows hes beaten, not one for abuse but i gotta bust ya
cause you play boys all night long....so we know you aint a hustla GOOD LINE I LIKED IT IT WAS FUNNY 8/10
took a chance with this battle, cause always the possibility ya win it big
but you rolled wrong, and only 10's ya ever see are the ones in your sig ONLY PERSONAL IN THE WHOLE BATTLE PROPS KID 9/10
OK U WERENT AS PLAYED BUT U STILL NEED TO WORK ON UR CREATIVITY WORK ON UR VOCAB U HAD THE ONLY PERSONAL LOL BUT ID LIKE TO SEE MORE UR FLOW WAS GOOD PROPS ON THIS WIN
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