nice man I liked the flow and image, I would have liked it more if there was a storyline not jsut a telling of sumthing ya know..I think it'd be more interesting, ok emotion great structure just a great piece man keep writing 7/10 I woulda like a storyline a lot...hit my Oms up please

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