ok nice topic liked the imagery to it of course u always got that and the emotion as well u always drop dope pieces very good u can very well become a writer and the most intereting piece is at the begining how u start it off
"I see you. You have something I want, something I desire
Like being a walking candle, your beauty is just fire
My feelings for you are so pure that deferment on a rose
My heart wishes that of our soul can stay attatch by a arrow"
tahts very interesting and ur vocab was good as well nice piece very good job keep it up......

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