Lemme break this down for the people that otherwise wouldn't understand it lolz...

I'm loving the concept you went with and how you expressed the sort of passionate murder and the ongoing quest of the person. I love how you do not portray it as a serial killer but more as a thirsty lover, someone desperately looking for love. The emotion was strong, might give people the wrong idea if they don't read it carefully. The imagery was definitely there, you also used nice pictures to express physical as well as emotional aspects of the scene. The flow was good, some similar sound expressions inside the lines which added to the flow. Vocab was on point as well so no complaints here.

Another solid and nice topical piece

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