this was definately interesting, different....a cool approach, and a solid om.

aight, you have a great hold on your vocabulary, but i feel you fall off with its consistency at times. first two lines were great for it, but it became very basic towards the end.....just work on keeping a fluid consistency with your piece. word, just minor though, great imagery, not as much emotion, but this piece didn't feed off of it. word, you're a good writer, keep elevating, word, and keep up.

rtf, the meaning of the music

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