kew twist and concept ma....this was pretty solid...i thought...yu didnt get too overboard with descriptions...and yu didnt write so complex that we couldnt figure out what the hell was goin on....it kept a happy medium...and i enjoyed it...i thought the flow was good...i didnt have trouble saying it....

keep wrtiting

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