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Old 08-02-05, 04:18 PM   #22
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Voted For: Spoken Word

>You a Livin Legend.. But bitch you aint got one win under your belt?
Ill put my nut sack in ya hand.....and my flow still couldnt be felt...!
wtf? not a punch 2/10
>I go spoken ..'ina state of mind'..that he doesnt know what to do..
Cus when you set up this battle without me known'n..i said who are you?
meh, worded blahh, and weak 4/10
>New to rv..and you think you can take on one of the oldest vets..
Cus ill put shots in ya dawg..and i aint talking about ya household pets..
you're an old vet, thats it....self glore 0/10
>So now think hard was this really a good idea for me to battle Bc..
Cus this nucca's gon give you alose..and watch All of Rv agree..
not a punch 0/10
>That your just another wack emcee...tryin to get fame by battling me..
So go home and plee..or god please..dont let me lose!..I'll go down to 1 knee..
not a punch 0/10
>And you call yourself a rap veteran..when you aint gon win this?
I can half assed...and Spoken words who?I dont think he exist..!
yes he does exist, and he never said he was rap veteran 0/10

overall: 6/10 sorry to be so harsh, but your verse really sucked, elevate.

>I'll smack this geek, His only two talents are whack and weak
Lighting a suitcase on fire is the only time youre packing heat
meh, alright 5/10
>So if youre smart, You'll beat it, Edit your verse and delete it
Youre probably reading that, Nodding ya head and agreeing
no, 1/10
>Im gonna dig up your grave, So i can easily collect your bones
And leave ya with no chance to talk, Like disconnected phones
played 2/10
>Stop lickin the cock dude, You think youre tight, But I'll rock you
Cause your just a bitch underneath, Like a chick in a costume
not bad 4/10
>So first Im'a target your torso, With at least a hundred hits
Denmark ya face, Cuz you dont know what Europe against
nice wordplay, best punch right here 9/10
>Shit bone, My skills are killer, And im making you fear that
By punching you in the forehead and makin your ears clap
meh, decent 5/10

overall: 25/60....word, one sided match right here, all the way, spoken actually had punches, bone's was just some random dribble, with self-glore, nothing, at all......so spoken easily gets this.

v/spoken word
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