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Old 08-02-05, 06:20 PM   #9
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Weak batte!

Flow-Defined...had some mults at beggining but nothing really special to say the least.That other dude had a basic rhyme shceme.

Punches-Genisis....do you know what a punch is?It's looks to me you don't.It's all about wordplay and metas.Go check the tutorials.

Personals-Sadly...neither of you had any.Generic disses by both

Multis-Defined...cause like i said before..the other dude had none.He had a basic rhyme sheme.

Originality-Defined.....

"ur like a candle,ima blow you out"
^^NO!!
I see your problem...you just stating stuff....ya gotta be indirect.Check tutorials and find out how to use wordplay and personals.

Vote-Defined(vote in link above)