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Old 08-02-05, 09:38 PM   #23
Rile1
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Voted For: Spoken Word

ok B-Mac...almost anyone could write a topical like that, good vocab and ok flow and all but it wasnt as creative as Spokens. Spoken u had good flow but I think u need to ahve more emotion and a lil bit more imagery and ull be killing them. V/Spoken for more creativity....please hit the battles up in my sig
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