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Old 08-02-05, 09:52 PM   #20
Daubs
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Decent peace fam,

first verse was ok, kinda an intro and gettin the flow set, had basic rhyming but it flowed well, second verse is where you turned it up, vocab was batter and flowed better too imo...good ish fam.

8.5/10
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