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Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C
flow-ok....problem child had a very newbish structure.Get rid of this ~ shit~.And don't write your verses in a paragraph form.
Punches-Both need some wordlplay and metas...but i'll give it to CataclyzM...cause problem child punches were newbish.
Personals-Neither and I suggest you guys both work on this aspect of battlin as it is important.
Multis-Neither....and once again...I suggest you both work on this.That basic rhyme scheme went outta style looong ago.
Originality- Cataclym ..though his lines weren't nutin special.The other lacked everything.
Vote-CatackyzM-I-C
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