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IP:
this was hell nice...lets brake it down.............
Tony:Flow was nice,stucture perfect,
lyrics nice...some nice metaphores...
MCPhilly:Structure wasnt that gd but flow was excellent,
some nice gangsta lines,and metaphores
B: u had nice stucture but ur verse was too short...
i would want to see more.....feels like u freestyled it,
but not bad...ust could be longer.......
M-E:flow was nice,verse feels like tonys verse,
stucture gd.................
whole verse was nice,gangsta peice......keep this up
and btw could u check my OM too.................
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