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Old 08-03-05, 07:44 AM   #13
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Voted For: Pressence

both came up with pretty decent verses..

as for punches pressence u had a lot more than reflekt...ur verse didnt really really flow to me but i guess it was better than ur opponents...and ur structure also gave u a plus on therre..

reflekt...u had only personals which had decent punches...but ur verse was kinna too repetitive...u kept on talik about takin it "easy" and lets be honest u were this close to self glorifyin...reconstructu ur structure brother dont be leavin spaces btw them and u aint always gatta xplain ur verse...i know u trynna heelp the dummies out but u not obbliged to...ya verse was iight but ya need a lil more work....

keep it up both of u...

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