Voted For: .Merkage.


blackfrostbite

check it,picture dis scenario/
you bout as straight as MJ wit a pink scarf,cut-off blue jeans,wit some pink boots on,enlisted in da gay rodeo/
^flow is way off, last line stretched like whoa! Could've been a decent punch

you da type to be a scientist so you expirenment by suckin all da dill pickles/
if you could ya would pop ya cherries wit a pop-cicle/
^aight decent bar

dat obsitakle apperantly you can't climb/
only time you do extreme merkin' iz on yo cpu scene watch 2 dudes go to work on eachothers behind/
^nice punch but last line stretched like whoa again, flow off

you behind,cheer up dats yo favorite postion/
as you see smackdowns im dishin/
^aight closer

.Merkage.

Black not wanted in The military but in wackness he's consider elite
cuz he culd'nt "shock his audience".....If he had "jumper cables" on da seats
^haha nice closer ya kno

I won't mirror ya but rhymes hurt ya Black and destroy your interior
Cuz you "don't want beef"... like "vegeterians" in "cafeteariors"
^good wordplay in last line, bit played maybe

Frostbite? put ice in and ya mouth and kiss my verse and ya name is right
With "both eyes open" he's still not considered solid with the sight(site)
^lovin last line with the wordplay, first is coo too

"sweet home" but Rapverse anit tha place you need to "consider moving"
STL herd you was repping them and juss told you to to "S"top "T"ha "L"osing
^nice playin off his location

Vote for Merkage for the better and more creative punches, better flow and vocab as well.

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