Wicked One
My words are chock full of scorching letters Method you think YOU'RE better??...
I'm STILL the King round this bitch and you're one of the Court Jesters...
Self glrofication, no punch.
Who the fuck said you were dope?? It's a vicious rumor...
Try and shoot me i dodge bullets like Wyatt Earp with six shooters...
I line. No punch.
I'm forever-great finished in a flurry words typed quick-in-a-hurry this is checkmate...
This is what happens when a legend faces a bum who's less than second rate...
Attempt at a punch finally. Self glorification again.
U wanna discuss posts. ho, urs are jokes writings worthless as if ur mind capacity was zero...
Ur mouths shape like an O cause u sip bottle tops n poke holes thru guys like cheerios...
Lotta meaningless multis that makes it hard to understand this line. It isn't complex, just stupid.
I'ma call u whistle the way u blowoff MC's ur skills are pitiful n simple...
U bit the big pickle, ur best efforts are compared to nursery rhyme riddles...
Bit a big pickle? Wtf is this?
Psssh.. and to think this wasn't even close to the best I could write...
It's bed time kid I just put you to sleep for the rest of ur life...
Self glorification and I did line again

How you are getting votes, I don't know. This is a horrible verse in my opinion. Meaningless multis, no real wordplay, maybe 2 or 3 punch attempts. You have nothing in this verse but self glorification.

New Method
you aint street now go back to the burbs
they call him chameleon cause he blends in w/ tha herbs
Ok punch. Not that original, but ok nameplay.
you can pray to god that you hope to win
shit you fallin off more than baggy jeans on an eithopian
Nah, not feeling this. Filler and blah punch.
i've never heard of you kid, so get off of my cock
so when i say nobodys perefect im really givin you props
Lol, I liked this punch, but first line is a filler
he aint drop knowledge, im jus makin him my son
i should change my name to 0 the way he's next to none
Eh...daddy line. Ok wordplay.
you schemin to win, theres no way man
dats walkin on thin ice an ima help you fall through w/ya plans
Ok wordplay. Nothing amazing though.
id prank call this bitch but cell phone sucks
but ima get you on the horn...of a fuckin elephant tusk
I will line.

Lotta fillers man you gotta work on that. Least you threw one or two punches that hit, work on using every line for a good set up or a good personal/punch.

That's some REAL feedback.

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