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Voted For: Chameleon
New Meth0d
you aint street now go back to the burbs
they call him chameleon cause he blends in w/ tha herbs
^feelin last line, first one is filler
you can pray to god that you hope to win
shit you fallin off more than baggy jeans on an eithopian
^again feelin second one but not really first one
i've never heard of you kid, so get off of my cock
so when i say nobodys perefect im really givin you props
^haha lol @ the last line, made me laugh
he aint drop knowledge, im jus makin him my son
i should change my name to 0 the way he's next to none
^lolz coo wordplay
you schemin to win, theres no way man
dats walkin on thin ice an ima help you fall through w/ya plans
^decent bar right here
id prank call this bitch but cell phone sucks
but ima get you on the horn...of a fuckin elephant tusk
^lmao...rude one haha
Nice but could be more consistent with the punches, good creativity, vocab is coo, flow is aight and all, just a bit more consistent I suppose...
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Chameleon
My words are chock full of scorching letters Method you think YOU'RE better??...
I'm STILL the King round this bitch and you're one of the Court Jesters...
^uhm bit self-glorifiying but still turned into punch though so good
Who the fuck said you were dope?? It's a vicious rumor...
Try and shoot me i dodge bullets like Wyatt Earp with six shooters...
^coo wordplay, nice punch in first one
I'm forever-great finished in a flurry words typed quick-in-a-hurry this is checkmate...
This is what happens when a legend faces a bum who's less than second rate...
^haha second one made me laugh bro, nice wordings and ish, good bar
U wanna discuss posts. ho, urs are jokes writings worthless as if ur mind capacity was zero...
Ur mouths shape like an O cause u sip bottle tops n poke holes thru guys like cheerios...
^DAMNNNNN, killed him with this one, holy sh*it man...
I'ma call u whistle the way u blowoff MC's ur skills are pitiful n simple...
U bit the big pickle, ur best efforts are compared to nursery rhyme riddles
^hehe nice punch here too, u really pickin the pace up
Psssh.. and to think this wasn't even close to the best I could write...
It's bed time kid I just put you to sleep for the rest of ur life...
^no punch but good closer though
You really picked the pace up towards the second half of ya verse, nice punches especially that one bar, damn ya killed him with that one for real! Flow was dope, nice wordplay and ish, solid battle verse!
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