Your voice is the most annoying thing i heard, no offense. Your rhythm is off, the chorus sounds weird, I don‘t know what you trying to say. The other guy sounds a little better. But he sound like he can’t breathe on certain parts. “I Deliver every day like a letter in your hat.” Yeah the lyrics need to be way better than that. I give this a 4/10 you sound similar to a grown-up version of that CarsonJet boy.

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