Odi et Amo
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Voted For: Pressence
Reflekt
like fat joe i guess u could say that you bringin it back
even the first 3 letters of ur name show that you a thing of the past(pre means before)
^playing off his name could've been done a lil better but still good though
u lucky im takin it easy..or i might take the life u livin
ya lyrics still wouldnt make sense if we took pre off the beginning*
^nice personal right here, well the second line anyway
im takin it easy on this rookie but i aint duckin attacks
the way i chop ya mouth its cool to say im cuttin you slack
^no punch, just self-glorifying
its a big gamble to wanna battle me like youre takin bets
cause your flow is only "mod"erate like youre the one makin threads
^hehe coo closer right here
Overall solid verse, good punches, some personal attacks, only the third bar kinda fell off. Flow was coo, vocab might be upped a little.
Pressence
talkin bout the W?,well kiddo,i suggest ya stop goin between decks
in battles his losses are automatic,so it explains the 'reflekts'
^nicely played off his name in the opener
biggest sheep of RV,ringing up both my ears with the sound "BAAH"
and i'd ussually tell newbs well-come,but HE'D probably say "AAAh"
^lmao, funny shit
beatin you is an easy win on the rec.,s' why, you desired like a cash-order
and ya verses are about as deep as where the toddlers splash water
^great wordplay in this one formed into punches
dumbass,thinkin he profound,wit hot nuetron n protons,thinkin nobody know
only reason we don't 'look up to him',cause he might 'try something below'
^hehe lmao at the last line, got me laughing man
Very nice verse here, got me laughin few times, good creativity, punches kept hitting hard, vocab was on point as well as the flow, no bad comments here!
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