Voted For: Still Motion

VOTE: SM.

his verse just touched my mind a little more. made me think a bit harder. i really liked the way the concept was flipped. you had an amazing use of vocab and some really nice descriptives here. the problem, to me, with the other verse was that it wasnt a good development of the idea. too much emphasis was put on the eating sheets and not the why or how etc...

VOTE: SM