thiss right hurr was a tight piece every thing was solid let me break it down :

Tony Green: Straight gangsta good flow good structure vocab could enhance but the raw emotion of anger was shown good metaphors 8/10

Mc Philosipher: Structure was a problem for me....ur lines were too long at points some lines were played....still gangsta good metaphors as well....multis iffy 6/10

~B~: Structure was a plus on this...had a good flow wasnt really fealin some of the rhymes but u clarified ur time problems. vocab was tight coulda been better tho still straight gangsta as well..6/10

M-Eazy: Structure was not too good u and tony had the same kinda thing goin straight gangsta probally the most attitude....flows goood...work on vocab a lil but i felt it....7/10

overall a very nice piece felt the anger and the gangster in you all liked it very much i enjoyed reading it

please rtf on my collab wit the sick one or my others......thanks