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Old 08-03-05, 08:14 PM   #27
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Originally Posted by Pressence
Voted For: Daubs

FLOW-Daubs...though both of you need to ditch that basic rhyme sheme.Kordazor even had a stretched line at end.

Punches-Daubs...that Kordozar guy was far too weak.It's all about wordplay and metas.Ya can't go stating shit.I seen a lot of your battles daubs.and I must say...ya punches are very creative.

Personals-Daubs had the only personals in this.Kordozar bassically saying generic lines that weren't really that hot.

Mutlis-Like I said..both of you need to get some multis.Some might tell you it's not a requirement.But it is.That's wat separates you from newbs.And based on how whack cats are on this site....combine punches and multis...and you'lll get worshipped.

Vote-Daubs


man...i had a lot a typos,....was in a rush typing it....


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Originally Posted by CataclyzM-i-C
Voted For: Daubs

VERYYY weak battle...wow !

first of all...every1s punches were pretty corny !
Daubs u called him a Dork...*wackkk*
Kordozar u said UBS...*wackkkk*

Punches - wow ummm...i have to say Daubs...only because his attempts to punch were better then Kordozar's attempts...neither of u really had anythin hard hittin 2 say...work on that

Personals - Daubs...he at least tried to say some personal shyt...Kordozar ur verse jus sounded mad random...it sounded like u were jus rhymin words jus to rhyme them....didnt really say anythin about Daubs

Wordplay - neither...both verses were madd simple...nutin made me think...work on ur vocab usage alil more 4 both of yall

Multis - neither...there werent even any attempts

Metaphors - Blahh... daubs...even tho they werent hard hittin at least they were there...u both tried but they werr both wack...but Daubs were ALIL if that, harder hittin

once again...this was a weak battle...no hate...jus work on ur punches n metaphors....but

Vote - Daubs


yall can return the favor on the battle in my sig...good look

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you know this guy is full of shit?He posted in my battle with sixth sense sayin we both whack like he did here.I wanna battle him and merk him and teach him a good lesson.