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Old 08-04-05, 04:50 AM   #24
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Voted For: Loyalty

i expected more from both of u

loyalty - ur verse was kinda good..i really liked ur personal about her not appearing unless theirs dick..even though i think ive seen it before..ur opener was a little weak..ur first line was better than the second..i didnt like ur closer though..u had some good thoughts in there tryin to attack her crew..but not all the punches connected.....7/10




will a peer - i thought u would do better than this..it looked like u tried to cram a lot of stuff into one line..personals?..u had some good ideas but none of them hit hard..the coke line i think was ur best punch..ur closer was kinda wack too.....6/10


loyalty wins