Voted For: Loyalty
pretty good man not the best i seen from you but it was good man nice work on it. you had some good personals and a fee punches your flow was good you had some nice vocab along with that came the rhyme scheme and punches was okay i felt that it could of came harder a few lines were played but other then these facts you had and okay verse man keep this up and youll elevate more blah nothing special here. you had some even played lines in your verse and the concept that you did more lines then him showed that you couldn't handle his shit. your vocabulary was wow just plain out garbage no hate need elevation on that man. also you rhyme scheme was shitty try and do some work on that that's like a prime example over elevation in text battles to get to audio. punches was and okay thing here nothing that hid hard really elevate on some. wurd.............................................
rtf
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plz thx
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