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Old 08-04-05, 01:03 PM   #10
Magic5
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Voted For: Kamze

Kid Chaos

multiple punches launched play stops leave this bitch slain//
horrible gut shots my aims locked time to comense fire on this wanna be game//
2. Concept had potential. Not a punch.
im rippin this pest with shots puttin holes in his chest//
puttin this fake to rest his death is a sin ive confessed//
0. Just a wack statement.
see im over your head once my rhymes are read//
rappin wont get your children fed so little bitch go to bed//
0. Didn't have a concept or a punch.
in this battle your the forest and i think im the flames coward//
ill start a forest fire while yo lame ass gets devoured//
2. Concept had potential. No punch.
to the end my skillz blossom into crys of war//
youve lost three battles so ill "even" your score//
4. First decent shit you've had.

Overall - 8

Kamze

This 'Kid' can't hadle me, i'm like a 'element' from the 'periodic table',
And he's feeling my 'force' and 'heat', like he was labelled as 'flamable',
1. Periodic Table and Flammable don't rhyme. Concept had potential. You worded it bad though.
He only 'signed up today', thinkin he could beat me and get his status to 'rookie',
But he couldn't 'estimate' or 'predic' me, like i was a 'fortune cookie',
0. Just a wack statment. Concept is played.
I 'juggle' personals and punches, like i was a 'clown' in the 'circus',
But i dropped on the 'flow(floor)', and threw them at him on purpose,
1. Flow doesn't sound like floor.. at all. This is a statement. Could have had potential.
This 'kid' can't handle the 'Chaos', that i'm causin in all my lines,
Why talk about him being 'wack', just take a look at his 'rhymes',
2. Concept had potential. Wasn't worded into a punch.
Your rhymes could be classified as 'killer', cuz people die of 'boardum',
And, you like a cd, cuz you're 'bootable' from the forum.
6. This was pretty cool.

Overall - 12

Vote - Kamze