|
The Emcee Shogun
|
IP:
Voted For: Pressence
Black Queen
Im in the damn Presence to just simply put you on the spot
By telling ya secret that you Macreep/Ktrini dont say you not *
^^ an ok personal..worded poorly
Cause i'm a Soldier... and i get glad-with- haters(Gladiators) bars
They're just die knowin what's coming, like aliens from mars
^^ennh not exactly a punch..worded bad
Of course, you just want to battle me to get the hype again
And you dig up all your rhymes from otha sites like its a reyclin bin
^^lol pretty good but not really flowin that good
And this guy said IPs mean shit cus i said him n Macreep IPs the same
This nerd got sprayed so much thats why he needed a new name
^^umm dont flow well
This herb finna get served fast so you be needing some help
So everybody should “Down grade your status to thug less!”
^^no rhyme scheme, really bad
Nobody’s going to like you so please jus don’t even try dude
So why should I try fool, when you diss yourself more than I do
^^lol, pretty nice
overall: 6.5/10.. pretty good verse, u coulda used multies more though. Also u have to diss him more dont just use the IP thing cuz it gets boring. Also work on ur wording cuz it seems to long when read. Good verse.
vs.
Pressence
dying for some sex,like your whole life is comprised of some ghost-kisses
cause all she be does is cum-plane bout it,like some horny air hostesses
^^ lmao nice man
disrespected,cause ya Open Mics SUCK!,they all either,strayed-or-neglected
She got Game in her sig,just goes to show she gets played-and-rejected
^^good flow good punch lol
trying ta sell your soul,but nobody wanted to buy it,and u in a hot-drought
your rhymes are bout as this-hired(desired)as poor college drop-outs
^^wordplay was forced, ok punch
all over you plan on bitchin and bitchin,like it's your sole niche-and-it's-zigs
I'll slap you and have you covering half ya face like the bitch-in-ya-sig.
^^lmao nice cuz that her in the sig
she thinks I'm macreep based on Ip's,so now she feel special like a scholar
cause she lackes sense(cents) like some rich people obsessed with dollars
^^dont make sense really...
buring herself up in a garden after swallowin seeds,is how she'd grow
cause her skill will never tie(thigh),with mines,like some legless hoes
^^umm ok wordplay forced again
overall:7.5/10... u had some forced wordplay but u made up for it in most of ur punches. u had great flow and I liked ur inner multies. Really the only bad thing is wording and wordplay, both of u seem to have that problem. Great Verse man.
V/Pressence for better punches and flow, I recommend u both keeo writing lol, and that u guys work on ur wording and wordplay, cuz P some of ur stuff was forced which is really bad.... Please vote on my battles in my sig..thanks-PEACE
|