Thread: hot 16......
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Old 08-04-05, 04:36 PM   #4
Kid Chaos
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Posts: 88
From: Atlanta, GA
IP:

ur close to being brokin in two, so get open and lose
what chu hopin to prove, i'll leave u soakin in pools
so what is what, slicin ur face is my only uppercut
u butterscotch, soft and sweet, lodged in a brothers gut
^^^
liked those lines alot
the structure was decent i caught the flow fine
and i like the way you mold your wordz
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because the cops is watchin the streets is talkin, yo hoes is unfateful yo family ungrateful , yo niggas and loyal yo niggas ain lawyers, and everybody saw you now ain...that... BITCH, hahah
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