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Maybe its me.. but i cant sit and put together either one of the verses in this battle.. the flow just isnt there. It looks like you thought of words, wrote a bunch of shit, and made the last word rhyme with no layout to ur rhythm.. I cant vote cuz im too new.. but im just givin some feedback to dwell on.
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The best things in life are Phree..
PHREE NAPDIZZLE
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