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Old 08-04-05, 10:49 PM   #20
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Voted For: Acuity

enygma-thought that the beat at starting(before the real one) was lame.I heard that a lot of times before.WHere they start off with some whacky beat or sumtin then break into the real shit.I thought ya punches lacked.I was left waiting for a dope punchline for the whole thing.Had some played ass shit too....like the Britney/madona one.I think your delivery was ight.But flow was off at some points.

FLOW-6/10
PUNCHES-4/10
DELIVERY-8/10

Acuity-Starting up was bad too.Until you got to the real shit started.I like the beat you used and your flow.I ain't a fan of English accents or slow rapping...but you did good.Delivery and everything was good.Just ditch that startin up where people were talking.Rap from start to end.I thought the effects you added were good.Really...i think the punches lacked.They were better than enygma though.

OOh....and you'll lose points for posting lyrics...wtf..this auidio...so why ya post that for?Enygma said it right...that is for homos.

FLOW-7/10
PUNCHES-7/10(for posting lyrics.)
DELIVERY-9/10

Vote-acuity

rtf please..
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