damn this is pretty ill, I like how u guys divided it cuz it sounds like a big story, I like tha flow and the vocab. as well, this was a great piece..im definitely looking forward to 2 and 3, keep writing guys.... and if ya dont mind can ya vote on my topical battle or the other ones too?? but this piece was excelent 10/10..-PEACE

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