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Old 08-04-05, 11:15 PM   #8
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Voted For: Young Blaze

im droppin bombs you droppin smelly ass terds//
chaos...wtf?
its death parade my rhymes are like a grenade and im da one holdin you still for the ride//
my method isnt to drop lines that evade but take you down even if i have to commit suicide//
chaos....gettin better
its a mad mans verse vs a weak kids nursey rhyme mates//
its a sad plan and worse then that tweaked shit that you spit against aitz//
im in ur verse...lmao
im beatin and defeatin you just efecting poetic rhymes on some shit like hamlet//
you decomposed by my rap yo shit is worse then wack but i suppose its good you on ain on yo own track//
decent...

now...
Eye's Scorn In Rhyming Wars,Snap Your Wrists So K Timing's Poor
Twist Ya Spinal Cord,Punch Ya Teeth Through Ya Cortex .........
.................................................. .........So Ya Mind is Torn......................................good punch.......................wtf is up with all the dots?...........

dude why do u use dots? it dont make ur structure look any better..
structure goes to: kid
punchlines to : blaze
wordplay goes to : blaze
enjoiment to :kid

v/blaze
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