This was feedback posted for Mr. Lyricist
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If i could.. id vote for lyricist..
- good punchlines.. good flow.. the only thing im not feeling is "whore-eyes'n'" If u were to just rap this and not write it.. it would make no sense to whoever is listening.. Im no great, but think about that next time u wanna break up words to different words that sound good
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