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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
IP:
I liked the word choice.. lemme break it down tho to be more specific.
(Hows this kid plan to win, he made an alias just to battle Spek
Know he saying "fuck you, pay me"? Look how quick he left his battle cheque (check))
- one thing i notice right away.. there is no solid flow.. i cant read this with any consistency.. this isnt a great line to begin with but i cant even try to explain the first verse.
(We call you bitches cause its true, its a R.eal A.ll W.oman crew
R.A.W's just like your avatar, cause you only got herbs stading behind you)
- i like the first part of this.. the flow thing got me again.. but not bad of a stab at all.
(Tell me what your loyal to, wait, go get more wins against wack kats first
14 wins against noobs, which would be your biggest accomplishment on Rapverse)
- i gotta be honest.. this bit was weak.. it seems like i had to read a book just to get to the kats first - rapverse rhymes..
(All woman crews audio section to me only sounds like a giant whore-moan (hormone)
Only reason you think your higher ranked than me right now is cause your-stonned)
- alright
Overall - If i could vote for this.. it would go to Spek.. i wont breakdown kortozar cuz im really not feeling a single word he got down. Spek, i see where ur going with ur multi-syllable rhyming, but you def need to work on the rest of your body.. It looks like you just through a bunch of shit together and put 2 rhymes at the end.. ur better off not doing that and creating an easy to read flow.. but not bad at all.. pe@ce
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